Where once lived laughter
A broken smile resides doors ajar
The girl whose eyes surpassed sunlight
In a dark room, lay staring in seemingly vacant space.
The 'don't fall prey to the clutches of love' philosophy he boasted of
Who knew he would one day regret
With tears streaming down his face, confessing his love
Holding her lifeless hand, seated by her bed.
© 2012 Neha Choudhry
A broken smile resides doors ajar
The girl whose eyes surpassed sunlight
In a dark room, lay staring in seemingly vacant space.
The 'don't fall prey to the clutches of love' philosophy he boasted of
Who knew he would one day regret
With tears streaming down his face, confessing his love
Holding her lifeless hand, seated by her bed.
© 2012 Neha Choudhry
5 comments:
Could you be any less awesome? eight lines, and u said it all! I am amazed how u do it every time.. Love you :*
Her pain and his helplessness.. sigh..i read it thrice, already! well done, you! :)
I tell you I just penned the worst and you surprise me with a yet another love-filled comment! *mmmuuah*
Seriously? Did you call this bad? This is so, pretty! It does what it has to and so well. In just a few lines! LOVE much :* :*
this is so amazing! it depicts love and sadness on a same note! HOW can you call this BAD!> really?
this is awesome! so are you!<3
Greeshma, Brinda.. Thank u girls :* Hugs.
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